Green+Group's+Argumentative+Essay

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Hook:
= = Would a change to only online education be beneficial for the students?

Connecting Information:
Students have been educated in the classic way (face to face) by centuries and it gets excellent results. The modern civilization is a product of it. So is it really necessary to change a method that works very well? (-Don't forget to mention the issue---The issue is online education. Should the US change from a traditional F2F style of teaching to a more modern online system?) The American system should not move toward an online education because the old fashioned method is really good. = =

Thesis Statement: ​
Principally since the face to face classroom model is more interactive than online education (since begins a dependent clauseso you have two DC but no IC...)because it promotes social skills, responsibility and learning. = = =Body Paragraph 1: =

Topic Sentence (TS1=Reason 1):
First, face to face education would develop social skills by helping the students to make friends. (Don't forget to mention the topic---The US should keep the F2F system because....)

Explain Controlling Idea (Reason 1):
This point is very important because the feeling of being part of a community is naturally in people.

Give Example:
Sometimes when students participate in groups or clubs build strong relationships with other students and it makes them act responsibly. It would create a sense of community through that they learn to interact socially with other people.

Why is this idea important?
It is an important ability for their future professional life.

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Topic Sentence (TS2=Reason 2):
Second, the face to face model of classroom encourages responsibility since it gives a better environment for learning. (Don't forget to mention the topic---The US should keep the F2F system because....)  

Explain Controlling Idea (Reason 2):
A classroom gives to the students the message that they are in a special place to learn.

Give Example:
The students have to pay attention to their classes because they should hear the information and understand it. In their homes, students can get distracted easily with things like TV, telephone, doorbell, music or people at the house among others.

Why is this idea important?
So it's very important that the students have a good place in which they can concentrate for their studies.

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<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Counterargument:
Some people may think that online education (is a good system because it) permits the students to learn easily, because using computers at home facilitates direct and quick communication between students and teachers.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Concession:
This is a very respectable opinion.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Refutation: (TS3=Reason 3)
However, the computer is just a tool which cannot replace the fact that the students can interact and learn with other students and teachers thereby improving learning.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Explain Controlling Idea:
This makes them more responsible with their tasks.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Give Example:
It's important to remember that in the classroom they learn knowledge and rules of togetherness which sometimes students don't receive at their homes.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Why is this idea important?
Moreover the students always can use online education like a way to complete their formal education (face to face).

=<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Conclusion: =

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Signal Conclusion with Transition Word or Phrase:
To summarize,

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Revisit Hook:
the online education is not a really benefit for the students.

With the passage of time the face to face education has proved to be successful. Nice! This is an excellent connection to your introduction.

In other words, the traditional method of education stimulates interaction in the students which is very good for them.

<span style="color: #335c33; font-family: 'Times New Roman',Times,serif;">Give a Final Thought:
The US system should thinks more about it in order to benefit both the students and society as a whole.