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Yukko Lujain Luna Daniella Essay 2 12-06-09

Face-to-face Education Have you ever tried on-line education to be a common way? If you have, is it an effective way to study? Nowadays, on-line education is getting common to learn in the U.S, so many students take on-line education. The issue is changing to the on-line education. Should the U.S. change from a traditional face-to-face education system to a modern on-line system? I think that students need a face-to-face education system. There are three reasons why face-to-face education is better than on-line study. Students can access their teacher easily, students can connect with classmates, and students can learn a sense of responsibility to study. The first reason why face-to-face education is better than on-line education is that students can connect with the teacher easily. For example, students need go to school, and meet their teacher continually. Therefore, if students have any question, they can ask the teacher immediately, and they can figure out their answer easily. Also they can discuss and share their opinion and suggestion, so that the teacher can give them some advices to improve themselves. Connecting easily with a teacher is important because they can study effectively. Therefore, face-to-face education is better system for students. The second reason why ace-to-face education is better for students than on-line education is that s tudents can connect with classmates easily. Making friends is one of the benefits of studying inside a classroom. Working with friends make a class more interesting. It's true that students can make friends on-line, but it's not the same. By doing "person to person ", they can make a real friendship and they can know someone better than they do through the web. In addition, students can learn from classmates. It's convenient to attend to classes because they can improve their studies in a better way. Making friends and learning from classmates by taking face-to-face classes are important because they can improve their study more than on-line classes. Opponents of face-to-face education say that students who have an on-line education don't have to go to the school. Therefore, it may be a convenient system because students can spend their time studying or working at home instead of going to the school. However, the students need to go to school to learn responsibilities similar to those in the workplace. Face-to-face option can give students a sense of responsibility to study. If a student studies on-line, he/she doesn't have to attend the class at a specific time. Keeping schedules is one of the most important points of the workplace. Students can learn about this responsibility by taking face-to-face classes. In conclusion, there are many good reasons that face-to-face is better than on-line for study. Recently, many students have tried to chose the new type of education. However, the traditional face-to-face way makes our study more useful and helpful because students can not only connect with the teachers and classmates but also learn important responsibilities for the workplace. The most advanced way is not always the best, and students should choose the way which is the best for them to study.