Red+Group's+FINAL+DRAFT

This page is for the FINAL draft of Red Group's essay.

Please look at the comments I made on your SECOND DRAFT and rewrite (revise) your essay.

 Traditional Education Learning  Can you imagine that only 2 % of the city population works in schools and universities? The Education system has been a controversial issue for a long time. The governments are thinking to switch the learning system from the classic style to online style. Most people believe that classroom learning is the best way to learn. In fact, classic learning style can make students more comfortable and relatable. This traditional way because it is better than online system for three reasons: student life, community benefits and government revenues. The first reason that the face to face system is better than the online system is student life. The universities give a high quality of learning that encourages students to work hard on understanding their subject. This education will prepare students for knowing the knowledge of facing the changing world with great confidence. In university students can find friendly people to be friends. Also, students can make international friends, and they can learn many things from them, they can ask them questions if they want, and to know about other people culture. In university campus there is beautiful natural surroundings. For example, great weather, large trees and secure. These three reasons can affect the way of the student life.  The second reason that face to face is better than online is classroom learning offers many jobs opportunities for community especially for people whose major aren’t connected with education. For example, salesmen in a food court on campus, so when a campus opens students support these people for their life. In addition, we can use these classes to improve the education grade for the people who work in the university, so the university can give him night classes a voluntary contribution or cheaply fees. These are some of benefits that the community gets it.  Opponents say that on-line learning may save the government money because the government doesn’t have to build schools. This idea has some value. However, the government of the state will certainly increase revenues if they build schools. For instance, income tax will not be collected not only from the people who are specialized in teaching but also from workers in admission offices, and security. Moreover, international students pay high tuition. In fact, international students’ tuition is higher than the national students so the income from the tuition can increase revenues. Also, students rent houses, pay city serves, and use city transportation. These payments will be profitable to the government revenues. Overall, the long term financial benefits to the government are great if they build schools. In conclusion, there are many benefits for learning in classrooms. This system makes the student to be educated better and useful. I think the classical education system in universities will continue in U.S and will not be changed, and the students should think about which education system can fit them.   