Blue+Group's+Argumentative+Essay

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=Introduction:=

responsibility to study.
= = =Body Paragraph 1:= ===Topic Sentence (TS1=Reason 1): The first reason is that we can connect with the teacher easily.-(Your TS is missing the topic---Face-to-face education is better than on-line because students can connect......See my notes on the discussion board.) ===

Explain Controlling Idea (Reason 1): I f we have any question, we can ask the teacher immediately.
===Give Example: For example, we need go to school, and meet our teacher continually. Also we can discuss and share our opinion and suggestion, so that t he teacher can give us some advice s to improve ourselves.===

Why is this idea important?
So face-to-face education is understandable way which is important to us. =Body Paragraph 2:= ===Topic Sentence (TS2=Reason 2): The second reason (that F2F is better for students than on-line learning is that the F2F style of teaching & learning is a more mature system....... mature education is better for students than immature education. ===

The second reason why mature education is better for students than immature education is that face-to-face education style is good system.
===Explain Controlling Idea (Reason 2): This way we can interact (ability to interact with students---this idea is different than "F2F is a mature system"which idea do you want as your 2nd reason?) with our classmates.===

Students can also connect with the classmates easily.
===Give Example: Making friends is one of the benefits of studying inside a classroom. Working with friends make a class more interesting. It ’ s true that we can make friends on-line, but it ’ s not the same. By doing “person to person ”, we can make a real friendship and we can know someone better than we do through the web.===

Why is this idea important?
It’s convenient attend to classes because we can improve our studies in a better way.

=Body Paragraph 3:= ===Counterargument: Opponents of face-to-face education say that students who take on-line education doesn't have to go to the school (---online education is not a human beingit cannot go to schoolstudents go to school, not the system : ) .===

Concession: Therefore, it may convenient because students can spend their time to studying or working home instead of going to the school.
===Refutation: (TS3=Reason 3) However, the student (connect this idea with the opponents ideastudents need to go to school to learn responsibilities similar to those in the workplace) have to learn about responsibility before they work in society.===

Explain Controlling Idea: Face-to-face option can give us a sense of responsibility to study.
===Give Example: If you study on-line, you don't have to attend the class on time or studying your homework until due date. Keeping due date or making it on time is one of the most important parts in society.===

Why is this idea important?
=Conclusion:=

Give a Final Thought:
I suggest this traditional way which makes our study useful and helpful. The most advanced way is not always the best, and we should choose the way that if it is good for us to study.